Friend of mine let me borrow this book. And I read the first paragraph of the prologue and winced. Read the second and already started to feel like this was going downhill for me.
There's been a few books I DNF'd. Beautiful Disaster, as an example. Except Beautiful Disaster was because of issues that weren't the writing. But this is the first time I've read something that I just flat out didn't like from the very first paragraph.
This...isn't looking good. X_X